Tuesday, 5 February 2019

FSTS: Script First Draft

Script Clone Theory by on Scribd


I'm not overly fond of the title, but I honestly cannot think of anything better at the moment.

1 comment:

  1. Hey Terry - that's a lot of dialogue in there - I reckon you could still cut to the chase a bit more - get to the phonecall sooner maybe? In terms of title, I can't help feeling you're giving the game away a bit here: you could go for something more elliptical, for example:

    Ezra
    Ezra's Call
    The Call
    Calling Ezra





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