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Showing posts with label Travelogue. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Travelogue. Show all posts
Thursday, 13 December 2018
Sunday, 2 December 2018
What If? Metropolis: Travelogue V2
Travelogue: City of
Sake Amfani
Location: North-west Nigeria, in the desert not far from
Niger.
Population: 8 million (Approx.)
You stare down the long, empty road. The sun, scorching; you
feel dehydrated. In the distance, you can see structures, you are unsure of
what they are. You look behind you, the recycling plant, the building you just
left. You had just been in there to ask for directions, they pointed you in the
direction of the distant structures. You asked what was there, they replied: “A
city where nothing is wasted.” Looking back at the plant, you see many
recycling trucks dump all their contents and drive off again, but suddenly a
new vehicle appears, this doesn’t seem to be carrying rubbish and it seems to
be heading towards to city.
You stop the driver and ask if he can give you a lift. He
seems to be in a good mood, he offers to take you to the city. He asks if you’ve
ever been this way before, you haven’t. He chuckles, asks if you even know
where you are, you don’t. “The city ahead of us is Sake Amfani, the city of
reuse.” He explains. “Most of the other major cities here in Nigeria waste a
lot of materials, one day the founder became annoyed with such waste and
decided to build homes with it. The site of the city was once considered to be
landfill, but now it shines like an oasis!”
As you approach the city, the structures are still difficult
to make out, but they are very clearly buildings. You ask what this lorry is. “Material
transport. Many of the materials used in the city are made from recyclables. We
make them at the plant and then we bring them up to the city for construction.
Behind us is about a ton of plastic; ready to be used in the construction of a
new home.” Houses made of recycled plastic? That sounds like an optimist’s
fantasy, but as you get closer to the city, you notice to road change from the
desert path, to something that looks almost like tarmac. “Even the roads here
are made of recycled material. Treated of course. Normal plastic wouldn’t be
able to handle the heat.”
You’re almost at the city. The driver pulls up next to a construction
site. “I’ve got to stop here and unload the material. Just continue into the
city, if you need a place to stay for the night, go to the centre, there they
can give you a key to a room in either the wall or the tower.” You both step
out of the vehicle. You thank the driver for helping and you part ways.
Before entering you look into the city. You see huts of mud
brick, wells of cobblestone, houses of plastic, buildings of metal, numerous
structures made from stacked shipping containers and lamp post using bleach in
bottles as a light source. This city seems oddly surreal and entirely possible
at the same time. You venture inwards.
The outer-city acts almost like a small village. People talk
like they all know each other and the houses look rather packed up closely. You
take your time walking through, watching a farmer feed his cattle, watching
children run around in a small park, witnessing a woman paint the outside of
her plastic home a pale red. There is a strange sense of home here. You would
stay here a get to know the neighbourhood, but you feel like you’re melting and
your throat is absolutely parched. You go inwards, hoping to find something to
drink.
A little further in and you find what appears to be the
market. Clothes, spices, fresh meat, vegetables, jewellery, random little
trinkets. Almost anything you could think of is probably being sold here. Reason
would also dictate that the items for sale would probably made from recycled
material too. At the end of the market is a well. Oh, thank goodness, you think to yourself. You march over to the
well in hopes of scoring a drink. You walk past all the market stalls. Oh? It
turns out you was right, everything made at this clothes stall is made from
recycled cloth. At least that’s what it says on the banner. You made it to the
well. An old man sitting by it, looks up at you and immediately offers a cup of
water. You gladly accept the water and then ask what is he doing? “I’m in
charge of the well here. This is well 3. There are 18 wells across the city,
making sure that everyone has enough water. Today is a hot day, so I pre-emptively
collect some for whenever people need it”. He smiles. You smile back and say
thank you. Continuing forward, you find it odd how nice people are here, but
you figure that there’s no need to worry about it.
You arrive at the city wall. A large wall made up of
numerous building blocks. This wall extends around the entirety of the
inner-city. It’s not much of a defensive wall, however; the entrances are far
too big and frequent to keep anyone out. Walking through the wall and into the
inner-city, the sheer number of people about has increased dramatically. This
is more like a city.
Busy streets. Hundreds of pedestrians. It would be easy to
lose track of where you are, if it weren’t for the giant tower at the centre of
the city. That’s where the driver said you should go, right? You head there. It
doesn’t take too long; crossing some roads, trying not to bump into people,
basic city survival. The tower looks incredibly daunting. A skyscraper,
hundreds of feet into the air. You wonder when this was built. You don’t think
about that for long though, the sun is infuriatingly hot and you just want to
lay down. You walk into the building. It looks similar to a fancy hotel. You
walk over to the welcome desk. You ask if there is anywhere you could stay. The
receptionist says there are some rooms free in the wall. She hands you the key
and tells you where to go. Back to the wall.
After a quick walk over and a climb up a flight of stairs,
you arrive at your room. A pale orange block made of sandstone. You open the
door. Wow. Much like the rest of the city, the room is remarkably clean, it is
actually quite cool in here and the window gives a fantastic view over the
outer-city. You collapse onto the bed, it’s soft and comfortable. You think you
might stay here for a bit. Continuing the trek can come later, but for now you
just want to revel in the beauty.
Friday, 2 November 2018
Thursday, 1 November 2018
What If? Metropolis: Travelogue V1
Walking down a dusty, desert road, bizarre shapes appear in
the distance. You walk towards these distant objects as you look around your
current location; you notice other roads, all heading to the unidentified
shapes. Continuing down the road, you hear the sound of a large vehicle zooming
down one of the roads. You look to the vehicle, it’s a rubbish truck. It
continues down towards the distant location as you hear another truck go by,
and then you see another, and other, and other. You wonder that maybe the
location ahead is just a landfill.
As you approach the location, you begin to notice more
distinct shapes. Cubes and prisms of various shapes and sizes, they almost look
like buildings? Of course not, buildings aren’t made of rubbish. Moving forward
you notice the stench of old metal and rotting wood, certainly smells like a
dump. Against your better judgement, you move on.
Getting closer and you can see the buildings slightly more
clearly. The buildings look like they’re made out of discarded materials.
However, you notice something new, there seems to be a gap between the ground
where you are and the ground the city is on.
You continue onwards. The gap gets wider and wider. You
notice that the road you’re walking on ends at the gap, and at that point there
seems to be some kind of walkway. The buildings look even more distinct, even
from here. They’re houses? They must be, you can hear the sound of families
coming from them, and you can see lights emanating from the make shift windows.
You’ve heard of shanty towns or slums, but this is something entirely
different. It must be at least double the size of any shanty town, this must be
some kind of shanty city!
Some of the rubbish trucks have reached the end of their
roads and have started dumping all their contents into the gap, which at this
point is very wide. You can also see the contents of this large gap, it’s all
rubbish. It actually is a landfill. Why? You understand that unwanted material
must go somewhere, but why is there a city in the centre of it? Will you find
the answers in the city?
Heading to the giant river of garbage, you finally see that
the walkway at the end of the road, is a slightly rotten wooden bridge,
connecting the main land to the island the city rests on. The smell is horrific
and the sight is just awful, you wonder why anyone would want to live here? But
maybe they don’t have a choice. It could be possible that the people simply
cannot afford to live somewhere better. You think its best that you stop
jumping to conclusions, it may be a better idea to head into the city and find
out how these people live for yourself.
Upon landing on the island, you’re unsure if this even is a
natural island. Is the ground made of garbage with a layer of mud on top or is
it real turf? The local people don’t seem to mind. You look up to the closest
building, it’s made of rusted iron and plastic wrap, very unsanitary. You peer
through a bit of plastic that is in place of a window, you see an entire family
in there. There looks like there’s barely enough room for 2 people, let alone 7!
And yet, they don’t look miserable. They’re sitting around talking, eating
dinner, laughing. Even the coldness of the metal the building is made of cannot
detract from the warmth of this home.
Are all the houses like this? How many people live here? The
buildings stack and the paths are narrow, this city is like a labyrinth. Before
journeying into the maze, you take one final look of this section of the outer
city. You notice some children running around playing games, you see some
people climbing into the pit and clambering back out with more garbage to add
to their patchwork houses. You see a sign, “Welcome to Junkyard City”, how did
you miss that? At least the name is pretty self-explanatory.
You begin you adventure into the city. The walls are tight
and there are people everywhere, it somewhat reminds you of the slums in India,
except this is Nigeria. Even though this is a clearly poor area, built from the
left overs of others, the people here still seem to have a sense of culture. You
see a few vivid paintings on some of the walls and you occasionally see small
statues resembling people in the middle of the city streets.
You think you’re still heading in the right direction, that
layout of this city is all over the place. You find a well, there is a group of
people surrounding it. You wait to see what is going on, and moments later a
bucket emerges from the well. The people celebrate as if it were New Year’s
Day, what did they find? Water. Really? These people must be in a really bad
state if they celebrate after finding water. You continue to watch as people
pass the first bucket around and as a second bucket goes into the well. Water
is such a basic necessity, you wonder if the people here even have food. It
seems odd to you that the people here also seem to be so happy and contented,
it almost seems as if they’re in their own little world.
You finally ask a local, ‘What actually is this place?’
“To you, a mess; to the government, a blemish; to society, a
disgrace; to me, home. Things are thrown away every day, never to be used
again, just like the founders here. They were used and then thrown out by their
society. They decided to embrace everything that is discarded. They began
building this place, at first out of spite, but then they noticed that people
without homes would come in seek of shelter. The founders then continued to
build for the people and the things that society casts out. You wonder why the
people here are happy. It’s because we have each other. Many of us have very
little material wealth and to the greater government, we are worthless. But
here we are all equal. We care for each other here, just outside a society that
cares for no one. We use unwanted materials because it reflects how we were
unwanted, but it also shows how we can be brought back to accomplish different
things. We are not part of the society, but we are a community.”
You think you know understand what this place is to some
extent. You wonder if there’s even more to this great city. However,
understanding the city still doesn’t stop the smell.
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