Hey Terry - that's a lot of dialogue in there - I reckon you could still cut to the chase a bit more - get to the phonecall sooner maybe? In terms of title, I can't help feeling you're giving the game away a bit here: you could go for something more elliptical, for example:
Hey Terry - that's a lot of dialogue in there - I reckon you could still cut to the chase a bit more - get to the phonecall sooner maybe? In terms of title, I can't help feeling you're giving the game away a bit here: you could go for something more elliptical, for example:
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